|Reviews for Three Adventurous Kittens|
| romaniac chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Hi I'm Romaniac Small Wings Flying sent me from the reveiw game forum.
I really like the discription in this poem especially those for the characteristics for the kittens.I also like the way they are constantly playing in this poem like there happyness will never is a very theriputic job.
| Lady Skybird chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Ahhhhh, such innocence and joy!
| The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Aww, how adorable.
"They rolled, tussled, and fought/ into the night, back into the day." i think you need an "and" there. It doesn't read as much of a sentence.
"Once there they romped, among the wildflowers; by the babbling brook." You don't need the first comma, and you could use a comma instead of a semicolon. It's not two stand alone phrases where they can be split by a semicolon.
I still can't get over their cuteness. Fav.