Reviews for Suicide Girl
Ventracere chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
For lack of better words, this poem was enjoyable. Paint me weird, considering that it was a darker tint to the poem but hey. The structure of the poem was able to fit well with the mood of your poem, so good job. I don't know if you realized this, but in the beginning you had some sort of rhythm to it. I think one thing you could do is to paint a little more imagery into your poems. :D You've got a pretty good start with it, perhaps elaborate a little more on the idea of your setting, and that would help the readers to get a better idea of what you are looking for. Nice job. I really enjoyed it ]