Reviews for That Friday
violets-are-violet chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Ahhh! This was lovely! I really enjoyed the detail and how realistic it really was :)

Really, brilliant job! :)
Recklessflower chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Remember me? :) Anyway, I loved it and I hope you something more like it soon because I would love to read it. :D

Hear from ya soon,

RecklessFlower
BlackFire101 not signed in chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
At the beginning of the one-shot, you did a lot of telling rather than showing. Like most of up until track practice was all prose. I know that it was supposed to be the back-story to set up what happened later, but a little dialogue here and there could have helped.

That aside, I really liked everything else that went on. Being a track runner myself (only for the summer) I could understand everything that was going on. The interaction between Jocelyn and Gavin was done in a realistic way as well. (Although I'm not sure a guy would mention throwing out signals, since he probably wouldn't even realize it, even if someone pointed it out to him). All in all, it was great!