|Reviews for Wings|
| Swallow-tailed Kite chapter 21 . 4/11/2013
You forgot fullstops for your last two dialogue sentences
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/11/2013
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/24/2013
About time :D
Am not going to create an account. 's not fun that way ;D
Anyway. Good job for rushing out a very nicely written piece in.. such a short time. Can't think up a name for ASU... ASU sounds alright anyway...
| Swallow-tailed Kite chapter 20 . 2/24/2013
\o/ AN UPDATE
What does ASU stand for again? Air-Speciality Unit or something, right?
You could always call them... erm...
..nevermind. ASU sounds fine...
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/22/2013
I KNEW YOU HAVEN'T ABANDONED YOUR FP ACCOUNT. Studies show that you've been on at least once after May 22 2012.
So. An update please? T_T
| Swallow-tailed Kite chapter 14 . 10/5/2012
Can I be your unofficial beta? ;o;
I like the story, but there's several inconsistencies and grammar errors, and I'd like to help you edit them.
| Swallow-tailed Kite chapter 13 . 10/5/2012
Wait whoot. Suddenly *le wild Feather APPEARS! ((along with rainbow hair and random descriptions :OOO))
| Swallow-tailed Kite chapter 12 . 10/5/2012
A little Sue-ish now X\
| Swallow-tailed Kite chapter 5 . 10/5/2012
Hope you didn't give up on this xD I read it all through. Though there's a couple a mistakes, it's pretty darn hilarious :D
| The Orange Cow chapter 3 . 4/30/2012
The 'anti-super' thing and the whole deal with Aaron's whole spiel seems a bit abrupt. Nothing wrong with establishing the opposition(assuming that things end up going down that route), but you may consider smoothing it out a bit; having what seems to be a good friend(Ian was described as one, at least) go from taking bets on who has what superpower to spouting vicious dogma in the space of less than an hour just seems kind of...
That being said, I guess abrupt responses do result from abrupt circumstances quite often in real life. As long as you think it passes the realism test, go for it.
| The Orange Cow chapter 2 . 4/30/2012
Good chapter, things seem to be progressing quickly.
From what I've seen, getting bored with a story is the quickest way to kill it, so grats on finding something that works.
| The Orange Cow chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Looks interesting, thanks for posting!
| Solomon Sia chapter 7 . 4/29/2012
First review! A good story here, and chapter seven I liked! I can see you getting more comfortable with the material and the characters the more you write. What is best is that as the chapters go on, the story is becoming closer and closer to what you want it to be.