Reviews for I Do
Felrain chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
How sad, the end was highly fitting. Well done.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
This is such a sweet and sorrowful poem, I think your writing is simply amazing!
Valenteen chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Keep going- I love your poems- I have to sit there and reflect. Sad, beautiful, and has me stricken by my imagination to think how she felt walking down the aisle- without her husband.

The last three lines are especially good- and they are the ones that touched me most.
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
wow. So sad, yet you got to love the words you chose and descriptions you used. I pictured the whole thing in my head with ease. Amazing job; the last 4 lines were my favorite. Keep up the good work! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni
JaredDean chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
How very sad. Great work.
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
This is so well written, and so terribly sad. The last 3 lines are the most beautiful, and were brilliantly chosen to end this poem. Really well done.
The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Nice storyline, and flow.

great ending. Keep Writing, and good luck on exams!
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
So sad, but beautifully done, I could see the wife walking down in her black outfit, people around her giving condolences that she hardly acknowledges.

Good luck with your exams, they're a pain. :)
Eleantris chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Oh God, this is so sad! :'( But brilliantly written, as always. :)

X :D