|Reviews for Freedom's Belle|
| S. J. Komza chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Hey Kathryn !
I definitely think that your story has potential, and I'd like to see how it progresses.
I have only one critique : try to write more solid paragraphs instead of jumping from one line to another so quickly. I may just be old-fashioned when it comes to literature, but it seems to me that if there were more descriptive paragraphs, readers would be more able to imagine the scenery as well as the characters. Then again maybe this is just meant to give us a taste of what is to come ;)
Other than that I really liked it - slavery is such a touchy subject to this day that I think it will be intriguing to read more about it.
Keep up the good work !