HI :) This was great! I liked all the different flashforwards! The gang member one was funny, in a dark way! lol This story flowed smoothly and it held my attention! I was intrigued to see each of her flashes. I like how she's not a normal polite girl. She has her own distinct personality and sarcasm that was portrayed very well in this short story! I liked how you tied in the title at the end. It was perfect! There were a few grammar mistakes but nothing big! Overall, great job :)

-Veronica

wow. a bit of a daydreamer, aren't we?

Haha. Cute.
The future life with the gang leader was the best though. :)

I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Each scenario was fit perfectly for each guy. This is an awesome story.

Cute and romantic. :) Unusual twist of story. :)