Reviews for The Eclipse
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This was good. Great use of imagery, and I really got into what I was reading. Well done! Keep it up! :)

As always, keep writing!

YuePantera chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
I loved this poem. Although it's short, the words in it are beautiful, and you were able to achieve such a good atmosphere to it with a small poem. Good job. X