Reviews for The monster
ChildCalledSilence chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Gee. Thanks for the nightmares. Who needs sleep. You are awesome and so is your creepy little monster who for some sick reason I want too call Maurice.
Thomicas chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Good job. I think you're really on to something; especially in the second part of the poem. Personally I found the first half a little insignificant and boring - I am talking about the part from "But it can smell" to "It can smell food". This part did nothing for me. However! After that I think you start building up some real suspense and horror almost in the vein of H.P Lovecraft himself; "It can smell fear out of pure trust" - brilliant!

Keep up the good work!