Reviews for Broken
MrFlorenceandthemachine chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Very good! WHY CAN I NOT WRITE LIKE YOU ? XD
atarashiaijou chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Great story! You should continue it. Hopefully she will find some hope :) And you did a great job maintaining your tense. It can definitely be a challenge to stick with one and not switch back and forth.