|Reviews for BladeArc|
| cmaej chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
I find being the "chose one" a bit cliche, but was isn't in the manga category?
Anyway, I already spoke about my feelings about Yuuto's first fight, so I won't say it again. But I wish we had a chance to learn about Yuuto's 'normal' life before he was sent off to fantasy world. I would like to know how he felt about leaving his friends, family, and other responsibilities behind.
Ennis sure warmed up to a complete stranger quite easily. I would have prefer that she left him alone to suffer a few hours then take pity on him.
| McMicah chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
I see this chapter gives us a little more on just where Yuuto is, and perhaps some hint to why he's there.
The action was alright, just fine for a minor battle, and no, Ennis, the newb is going to be sticking with you for a while, I'm sure.
| Fierce Ookami chapter 36 . 12/5/2013
So Ludd is the one that betrayed him. interesting. I was worried that it'd be a member of his harem lol. but seriously this was an amzing chapter and the fact that Ennis and Yuuto ended the battle with Leonard together made it even more epic! so the dreaded Nidhogg appears at the most inconvienient time. I know Yuuto will win, he's the protagonist, but I just don't know how yet lol keep it up!
| Lightning Berserker chapter 36 . 12/4/2013
Aww crap on a stick...shit is about to explode everywhere and that's an understatement.
| Miles Montgomery chapter 17 . 12/4/2013
Yay! After like, what, 1 or 2 years, I finally finished an arc!
Wow, Kamui's like...
| Miles Montgomery chapter 16 . 12/4/2013
Death is an enigma. Is she for him or against him? Guess time will tell.
| Miles Montgomery chapter 15 . 12/4/2013
Ooooooooh...Yuuto almost lost it. Interesting. I wonder how Ennis and Claire will figure out how to get along for Yuuto's sake. Should be fun.
| Miles Montgomery chapter 14 . 12/4/2013
Been a long time.
Quite a few grammatical errors and a couple of spelling errors, but since English is not your first language, impressive as always.
And Claire...is a girl? Does Yuuto's harem grow even more?
| cud-b-better chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
A tsundere elf who doesn't have too much shame, sweet. When that hooded girl ran into him I was kind of expecting her to relieve him of some of his possessions. I have to say ennis is pretty generous giving a bag full of coinage to yuuto. So it is a sort of rpgish setting what with the job classes kind of thing. I sure hope yuuto stocked up on his phoenix downs, they're really useful things afterall, lol.
Considering the fact you weren't overly keen on corrections I'll lay off putting them in when I review your stories. *Fight the temptation*
| McMicah chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
So if you are a paladin, the class specifically designed for taking hits for weaker allies, you can plausibly wear less armor? Ennis, are you sure you picked the right class?
The class speak actually confuses me a bit. Mostly since it makes it sound more like a game instead of another world, but it's not my story so what do I know? Nevertheless, Yuuto's journey is just starting, so I just have to see what happens next.
| xxxyx chapter 9 . 12/2/2013
Finally, a male char. And it's a perv? You listened to Edge, huh? -w-
Yeah, wth? I almost thought it's another Lord Astald. *shot*
Nice display of emotions...
And you just have to make that scene. Don't people knock nowadays? Or lock their doors anymore?
Forget it. It's Louis-san.
'Man, that was quick.'
'Wow, that's funny...'
Anyway, overall, so far, this is a story with above average prose, above average flow and okay characters. The only thing that I couldn't judge so far is the plot. 9 chapters into the story, and still not too much for me to decide whether it's good or bad. Nothing is jarring enough yet. Maybe it's the pace that is slow.
But this is a fairly good story overall, from various aspects, even if the characters... are not truly outstanding, but passable and didn't mar the story. I find Ludd the most interesting so far, though.
But it did read like a real RPG anime. So, good luck.
| xxxyx chapter 8 . 12/2/2013
Training and training...
Forty bandits... emphasis on forty.
Two people army?
Not too tense for a battle though, the details were a little bit... nothing stood out too much. Except maybe, the crotch-stomping.
A little bit fillerish, maybe, just another day, another quest, but works anyway, in showing how deadly Yuuto has grown, plus how he makes a formidable pair with Ennis (combat wise)... but, is it enough?
| xxxyx chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
Yep, I knew that Death wanted him to be a Dark Knight. But didn't guess that she would interfere directly and immediately, though.
Karma... foreshadowing? Expect a bad ending for Yuuto-san... or at least, an uneasy one.
| xxxyx chapter 6 . 12/2/2013
Hm, your prose is not bad, not bad at all. But the premise sounds like... something usual. But still, not bad. It's still but a start, still beginning, so I can't judge much of the storyline.
Well, now that we know Yuuto's reason of entering the world, maybe Reaper-chan's particular animosity towards him would be explained.
And the worm... I wonder if you'll use it like Puella Magi's Walpurgis Night, but... hmm.
Hm, pace just right... not much to comment...
| McMicah chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
From what I can see in this chapter, Yuuto is in way over his head. But apparently, he has some dormant power that is so rare that he was brought to this fantasy world.
I'm not sure about how I feel about Ennis, but that may change. I'll try to read more when I can.