|Reviews for BladeArc|
| Razorine chapter 3 . 11/16/2013
Action for the win!
Ennis is quite the tsundere. Although, she and Yuuto make a great pair x3 Once again, the terms are appealing. BladeArc strikes me as the sort of story that could inspire some RPG like Zelda. I'm not comparing the two (I've no evidence to do so) but I am excited to see what the former has to offer.
And wow, Ennis makes a bold statement. It's funny when she tries not to blush xD
Good call on bringing the history! In my opinion, explaining the world of the story can be a hard thing. You've done it exceptionally well. I'm already liking the setting of the High World, and the world history of BladeArc x3
Lesser Wolf? Are there different types? xD
Looking forward to reading more! ;D
| Razorine chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
Old World... I am liking the fantasy terms already xD Spellcaster, Freelancer, Wizard- I'm just imagining some magic school to pop up out of nowhere, with added slice-of-life students *is shot*
Ennis' character is an unpredictable one, something that is quite relatable to me (don't ask *sweat drop*). Am looking forward for the character developments, especially Yuuto's. Their relationship so far has intrigued me, and I'm already amused by how Yuuto has his internal monologues. Just another reason why first person POV works well for him x3
I think it's a skill to write a mundane scene and still keep a reader interested. Your prose is quite concise, and very easy to follow. The events are a bit fast-paced, but those only keep my interest. That freckled elf will have a callback, I'm sure!
Judging by the title of the next chapter, there will be some action. Am looking forward to Yuuto slashing monsters *fanfare*
Will read more! ;D
| Razorine chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Wut? He died by slipping on a banana peel? And porno? *intrigued*
Yuuto strikes me as a sarcastic character, and I'm a stickler for those. First person POV works well for his character, and I'm excited to see how you'll shape the chapters from his perspective.
Fantasy always attracts me, no matter how many evil monsters and berserkers keep being re-used. You give it a tinge of uniqueness with the theme of swords, something that I'm excited to see as well. I'm surprised that you got a lot done in this chapter, especially with your use of words and nice pace. Elves and sorcerers? Forest of Illusion? Reminds of Deltora Quest! *is shot*
Ah, Ennis should prove to be an interesting character. It's funny how she has more authority over Yuuto, yet had no control over the fight with the Giant Wolf. Which reminds me, this chapter already presents some questions. Yuuto can wield Noblesse, a sword that supposedly only heeds to Ennis? I'm already pondering. And the fact that he seems to be so normal at the start...
Ack! I've ranted too much. Oh, well. Will read more soon! ;D
| Fierce Ookami chapter 35 . 11/15/2013
this was amazing! for one it had Yuuto's glorius return and the fact that the enemies were scared silly that was hilarious! I was insanly happy when i saw the chapter. it's been sooooooo looooooooong! Keep it up!
| Eri Rein to Ero-sama chapter 2 . 11/15/2013
Ah I see. So it wasn't actually set in a game, but rather a something like some sort of a parallel world with some RPG elements.
I do hope this will focus more on the fantasy genre than the RPG thingy. I'm kind of tired of seeing RPG in anime and manga nowadays. XD
And slowly building a harem there, aren't we? XD
| Eri Rein to Ero-sama chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Death by slipping on a banana peel. That must be one of the lamest deaths next to getting surprised by a phone call and then get your head bashed on the wall. XD
I like the narration. I don't know, but to me, it keeps the story flowing fine. Smooth narration is good for me.
As for someone like me who has very little attention span when it comes to stories, the length is good enough. (Yes, I have to mention that.)
As for the first chapter. Well, that was "normal"? Yep, nothing much flashy or amazing, but hey, it's just the start so I bet something big is waiting for me. I look forward to how this story will progress.
I'm not much into fantasy (unless there's really something that gets me to check it out), but at the very least, you got my interest.
| Daniel Steadfast chapter 35 . 11/14/2013
Hello Luis-sama! Great to have you back! Love the new chapter! :D
| xxxyx chapter 5 . 8/27/2013
No fantasy MMORPG is complete without The Reaper! Uh, kinda. Feminine manifestation of death? Pfft, should've guessed. :P
Hm, the start of a legend? Sounds intriguing.
| xxxyx chapter 3 . 8/27/2013
Hm... I'm starting to think that you'd make a decent writer... for an RPG. :P Lol, even calling the enemy 'low-leveled.' And experiences, and... yep, do I need to say more?
Um... that paragraph near the end, the use of the word 'hand' was a little bit repetitive.
Nevertheless, sounds like a story that will greatly appeal to fans of the fantasy MMORPG genre.
| xxxyx chapter 2 . 8/27/2013
How about an arrow to the knee? *shot*
Wow it is really RPG-ish. There's even a starting class. I like your choice of names somehow, not sure why, but they sounded... right.
The pace is set, I see. You must've edited this thoroughly, though, I didn't find anything out of hand, so well done.
| xxxyx chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Death by banana peel... pfft.
Well, anyway, it resembled the usual setup of fantasy-world-entering. I just hope you won't disappoint with execution, okay?
Hm... the very detailed narration seems to be your strength... and also could be your weakness, if you slipped into long-windedness. Especially with first-person POV. Well, from what I've read so far, mostly strength, though, so OK.
And despite nothing outstanding happening so far, you have a very 'stable' style, making the story look like a vividly presented fantasy RPG. I wonder how the story will go on.
Cheerios then. C:
| bradpara chapter 17 . 7/31/2013
Very well done fight scene. Also, a very ominius way to end things and start up a new arc. I so need to get back into readin on FP.
| Kiento21 chapter 34 . 6/5/2013
I love this chapter :DDDDDDDDD You did such an amazing job with the little twist u added in there. You had me on the edge of confusion because of how it started. Great chapter I can't wait to read the next one :D
| Fierce Ookami chapter 34 . 5/20/2013
i read all 34 chapters, its an amazing story so far. i love tge characters, the setting, the plot, and the clichè anime stuff. there are alot of errors through out the story mostly grammatical errors but its still amazing, keep up the good work!
| Miles Montgomery chapter 13 . 5/19/2013
This Claire guy. He seems to have a hard past, yet for some reason, I cannot trust him.