|Reviews for Snowflakes|
| The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
And I'm already cold here. :)
I don't think you should use flurry twice in such close proximity in the first stanza. It reads a little oddly. I love the image of the snowflakes falling though.
"...pool./ Soon to be caught..." I think a comma or ellipses would work better than a fullstop there. The next sentence doesn't read like...well, like a sentence.
But beautiful images as always. I wanna see snow. *sniffs*