Reviews for Dear god
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
I love how you left "them" ambiguous, because it doesn't matter who "they" are. What matters is that you want them safe and you're praying for them.

The part about not liking church resonates with me. Going to church and being a good Christian have nothing to do with each other. This poem (indirectly) shows that.

Great job.
True Talker chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Beautiful but sad because you should be able to trust someone with your whole self.