|Reviews for confusion|
| the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Wow, this threw my head for a loop. I like it. :P
One small criticism, though: I think you should have put a question mark after "And won't stop until you've been stripped of worth." I can see that you decided to go with virtually no punctuation here, and generally I like that, but I think in this case, an extra question mark is necessary. It adds clarity.
| True Talker chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Interesting. This made me think.