I think Charlie is not following her own rules. She is definitely feeling for him... Even though it is one if the main rules. Wish we could have seen her in action before as well. Seems really hard for these girls to stay detached and not get emotionally evolved.

This story was so cute! I thouroughly enjoyed it. I have to say that out the ending was the best part - very realistic of you not having either of them express their undying love for one another. I loved the epilouge, very good wrap up of events and it definitely showed their relationship's direction.

I also loved your direction of Cecilia. I will be honest, I kind of predicted that she Brenda... and by the sound of your auhors notes, I wasn't the only one. But the whole ordeal of her starting her own club...totally unexpected!

Great job and great story!

Yep, I hate Cece.

Wait, I didn't think that Cece would be mean. Oh no. Oh my god.

I wanted Brenda to be real. Oh no.

Brenda is real? Wow. I was so sure.

I don't trust Jane.

Cecilia is so playing Ollie. I hope not.

Oh no. "Brenda" isn't real. Ollie's a client. Oh dear.

… sweet, charming, and perfect? She's just… kind of annoying to me.

I still really like the theory of Cecilia being Brenda even if it ends up not being true.

Even though you have a different girl in your poster, I can not stop picture Charlie as Dianna Agron. LOL, anyway, amazing story!

Nooooohoho! Why must it end?

Gosh dammit. I cried during this story. I always cry during your stories. And I hate it. It makes me feel like a total weird freak. Ugh. Whatever.

Your stories rock

Best story I've ever read. You had me glued to my screen reading this. Your characters, storyline, twists, they were all fantastic!
I absolutely loved this story!

Thank you for this beautiful story and the amazing characters! i feel honoured! 3