Reviews for The Girl Who Feared Apples
Princess97 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
That's an interesting challenge... is there really a phobia for apples? I wouldn't be surprised if there was one though.
And.. THANK YOU! for your wonderful review!
Valenteen chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Love your sense of humour- its great. The story and the sense of humour. Every time I read it, it makes me laugh.
The Red Eyed Lynx chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
wonder whats going to happen next.
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
lol This is cool. Really enjoyable, can't wait to read the next. Keep it up!

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni
littlekitty5 chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Oh wow, a phobia of computers? I definitely don't have that. xD Great story, though. I love funny things. - So, yes. I love the idea of a fear of apples. It's funny to think that you'd never have written this if you hadn't entered that writing contest, was it? Well, anyway. Well done, I only spotted one mistake: 'devils fruit' should be 'devil's fruit'. That's it, though! Everything else looked fine. :3 Keep on writing! You're good at it!
Tsuki no Usagi to Umi no Zou chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Computers, lol. Apples, lol. Excellent job, so funny! I like how you made the main character have your best friend's name :)

And thank you ever so much for reviewing my poem :D