Im glad this one didnt rhyme, I was starting to get a doctor suess vib from you... Like a dark doctor suess... Or a lighter version of Poe.

This is so depressing, in a good way. You can perceive the pain and hurt so easily and strongly in this piece. I liked that, in my opinion, none of the stanzas overshadowed the other. They each had powerful and meaningful words in them. I loved this poem as a whole and thought it was a marvelous piece. Very well done, I enjoyed it very much! :)

As always, keep writing!