|Reviews for To Be A Living Leaf|
| Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I loved it. There is beauty in this piece and I loved the format in this poem. You put pictures in my head again, something I so love about poetry. Very well done. Keep it up! :)
As always, keep writing!
| ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Sweet and pretty.
I do have one suggestion, totally my opinion,
The little two line stanza doesn't fit, but that doesn't mean you should take it out. I think a good way to include it without it seeming awkward, would be to say, in one line, "Cold strikes and leaves begin to fade"