Reviews for Tore Out my Still Beating Heart
Love-Comes-In-Many-Forms chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I disagree - I can feel the emotions within the writing. This is good! I suggest, for future reference however, that you try and keep the lines around the same amount of sllyab;es to give the poem more emphasis.

Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
This is good, reminds me of my own life and a poem I wrote titled Trust is a Curse.