|Reviews for Encompass Now|
| skersey chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
This piece is pretty neat. My suggestion to you would be to add some punctuation marks to make distinctions in flow, like in lines 6 and 7. I think the images created here are cool, like the sun being in awe of the moon, especially since the moon is so much smaller. Really well done. keep writing!
| SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Hello! I absolutely love your poem. It's so subtle yet powerful. It creates a very surreal moment (for me) .