Reviews for Encompass Now
skersey chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
This piece is pretty neat. My suggestion to you would be to add some punctuation marks to make distinctions in flow, like in lines 6 and 7. I think the images created here are cool, like the sun being in awe of the moon, especially since the moon is so much smaller. Really well done. keep writing!
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Hello! I absolutely love your poem. It's so subtle yet powerful. It creates a very surreal moment (for me) .

Great job!

SLP