Reviews for Someday And Today
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 16 . 10/24/2013
I'm happy that you got that off your chest, you'll soon learn that everything happens for a reason. Some people are just supposed to be guest stars in your life, don't worry, your starring role I am sure is on your horizon, you can't rush it :)
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 15 . 10/24/2013
Ohhh! Back and forth hey... ahh I guess that's life. Well written chapter
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 14 . 10/24/2013
Well that surely was a big turn of events, but good for you!
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 13 . 10/24/2013
:) Beautiful
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 12 . 10/24/2013
OH YAY! This chapter was your best yet!
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 11 . 10/24/2013
I'm curious as to what was so embarrassing? I do like ten horrifically embarrassing things a day so don't feel too bad haha
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 10 . 10/24/2013
It's amazing how those little moments can just make your day
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 9 . 10/24/2013
OHHHH those few words spoke volumes, last two lines! WOW !
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 8 . 10/24/2013
Did you really write a song! Wow! I hope he is deserving of such a gift!
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 7 . 10/24/2013
This reminded me of when my bf and I first started dating :) Watching him laugh is the best! This was super sweet
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 6 . 10/24/2013
Jeez that was beautiful... I loved how you built him up in the beginning just to break him down in the end. I'm sorry you had to go through this... no girl should feel that way!
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 5 . 10/24/2013
:) I loved this, the repeated use of the word yesterday made me think of the Beatles and I love the Beatles. Also I felt like it was a big movie moment, I could see the whole thing, very well described
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
The poetic flow is sound, you tell the story well in prose... the contents however was quite heartbreaking... dreams like that is just unsettling and I'm sorry if you were really dreaming that...?
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 3 . 10/24/2013
Don't ever feel you're pathetic! The thoughts we have when we're kids are not supposed to be the opinions that remain with us as teens (and adults), so don't feel ashamed of being the girl that fell in love, be proud that you were the girl brave enough to do so in the first place
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 2 . 10/24/2013
Love the use of then and now, showed your progress!
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