I'm happy that you got that off your chest, you'll soon learn that everything happens for a reason. Some people are just supposed to be guest stars in your life, don't worry, your starring role I am sure is on your horizon, you can't rush it :)

Ohhh! Back and forth hey... ahh I guess that's life. Well written chapter

Well that surely was a big turn of events, but good for you!

:) Beautiful

OH YAY! This chapter was your best yet!

I'm curious as to what was so embarrassing? I do like ten horrifically embarrassing things a day so don't feel too bad haha

It's amazing how those little moments can just make your day

OHHHH those few words spoke volumes, last two lines! WOW !

Did you really write a song! Wow! I hope he is deserving of such a gift!

This reminded me of when my bf and I first started dating :) Watching him laugh is the best! This was super sweet

Jeez that was beautiful... I loved how you built him up in the beginning just to break him down in the end. I'm sorry you had to go through this... no girl should feel that way!

:) I loved this, the repeated use of the word yesterday made me think of the Beatles and I love the Beatles. Also I felt like it was a big movie moment, I could see the whole thing, very well described

The poetic flow is sound, you tell the story well in prose... the contents however was quite heartbreaking... dreams like that is just unsettling and I'm sorry if you were really dreaming that...?

Don't ever feel you're pathetic! The thoughts we have when we're kids are not supposed to be the opinions that remain with us as teens (and adults), so don't feel ashamed of being the girl that fell in love, be proud that you were the girl brave enough to do so in the first place

Love the use of then and now, showed your progress!