|Reviews for Angel Assassin|
| moonwingmedia chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
I like the idea you're playing with here, but your complete absense of descriptive detail makes this really had to follow. You have taken no time to describe the main character, the setting, anything. What you've got here are some really good brainstorming jots, but it's not a story yet. Flush out your idea and really paint a picture for your readers.
I always love stories about the war between Heaven and Hell, especially when the protagonists are on the side traditinally seen as evil. Actually, the last book I published had a protagonist that was the Antichrist, so I was naturally drawn to your story. I want to see where this goes, but I want you to really dive into what you have so far first. Remember, an author's job is to tell the story, not tell ABOUT the story. Put me in the moment. Go step-by-step with the actions instead of jumping from point to point as quickly as possible.
I hope this helps.
| mojaganda chapter 2 . 5/8/2012
nice story please upload soon but i have 3 question
is his name Adam, and what is his power, and what is the color of his wings