Reviews for The War Between Me Because of You
I'm your Zero chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
wow...nice. ur a good writer, keep it up.
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Really cute.
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
This is really good. It is so powerful and the descriptive contradictions here are beautifully written. You presented an amazing poem and, as always, I loved your choice of words! :D This was a marvelous piece, I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
wow i can sooo realte to this! I love it! very complicated situation! want my advice? lol go with one who was there before the walls, before the jail before you knew you couldn't trust. They were there in the begining and usually there still around hoping for your best. In my experince.
ditzygirly22 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
I think this might be my favorite poem you have ever written. Things are starting to make so much sense with you. I know I'm supposed to be helping you keep that girl locked up, but I'm not to sure anymore. hehe:) We have got a lot to talk about tonight! (from both of us).

Wow it sounds like I am writing an email, not a review. The poem was amazing! You showed how you felt and used all of your years of experience in writing to make it mean so much.

Your NOT a rabid squirrel friend