Reviews for Fallen Angel
Red Red Ribbons chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
What i see here is more than just a toy breaking. It is, a heart that has broken through the loss of someone. Tears are embedded with silver in each word, the hard facts smashing you like a brick wall. Once again you are a child, something precious of yours is gone, but now, you must see the facts again-It is broken, gone, never coming back. I feel the own pain in my heart, the sound of tearing as the heart breaks away, the skies storming and the crows mourning, all in the misery of a single poem. No, the poem is not broken, but the heart is. This, this is the saddening truth of life. Amazing.

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