Reviews for My Heart
Thomicas chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Strong words and very emotional. To love is a dangerous thing. Great poem! (I also liked the nice touch with the subliminal message). Keep it up!

(Got the right poem this time, didn't I? :) )
wolvesdrinktea chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
A very good piece, although it might work better as prose. The message in bold was a nice touch, & you definitely nailed the strong opening. You show a lot of potential, so keep writing! (:

~ Char x