Reviews for The Moon
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Very dark. I like it.
True Talker chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
This is sad and it makes me think.
Archia chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Oh that's ominous, and the last line makes it even more so. I enjoyed all the stuff about the moon, it seemed to be the main aspect here. "Do you feel the moon?/ I do." I like how that's repeated at the end, just the simpleness of the words 'I do' make it deep. Really nice poem.