|Reviews for Fairy friend|
| IttyBittyDice chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Very well done. I love the way you revealed everything with the four lines. I noticed you misspelled silhouette, but that was about it. I would also suggest you use spattered rather than splattered, unless you meant to convey wetness in some way. I wish you luck in your improvement! Oh, also, I find it much easier to write summaries when I imagine that there is a kind of "more to the story" aspect of the poem, and write in in a way that reveals the content of the poem without actually writing the poem in the summary. I'm not certain how well it works, since it doesn't attract many readers sadly, but I hope it helps a bit.( It might also be that I post late at night and it gets buried easily, plus it seems most poems are lucky to get one review, let alone the amount some one chapter stories achieve)
| Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Wow this is good.
| katrrat chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
*shivers* I absolutely love it! Fantasy poems have got to be my favorite. I can quite picture your 'desired' fairy friend. A great piece.