Reviews for A Misplaced Desire
Reena chapter 9 . 10/23/2013
Ok you do a damn good job at confusing your exactly happened to Dylan and Milo after Mercade's death?,why did Dylan want Mercade to stay with him and even cut himself just to feed the demon,when he had raped him when he was alive?,did Mercade become a demon to get revenge?,how did Dylan's dad die?Why did Dylan become Milo and forgot who he was?,Was Mercade a pedophile or was dylan different in his eyes?,how did Milo ended up at an inpatient care?,what made Dylan kill his own brother?,Mercade has possessed Riley's body or killed him and just taken his appearance?. So many are questions and the no. of ppl dying keeps increasing as the story is progressing.I keep checking for updates and was really happy to read a new didn't clear anything but I'm looking forward for more:)
Maddam Redder chapter 9 . 10/21/2013
Great chapter! But I am so damned confused! Lol. I hope you will clarify soon! ;)
Reena chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
In my first review I wanted to say I wish there was romance in the story,that is the only thing missing in this perfection created.
Reena chapter 8 . 10/11/2013
Wonderful wonderful wonderful! Even though I get confused at times,I know you'll clear everything with fallen in love with the suspense,thrill and the angst of the story.I can't make out whether Mercade loves Dylan or hates him or did Mercade get Dylan to murder Milo for hiding his I'm enjoying the moment and thinking about the updated chapter and what might be waiting for us in the next and lots of love:)
Reena chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
AMAZING!love the story,only thing I'm sad about is that there is no to calico that I got to read your story because seriously its one heck off mind boggler,nothing like I've ever read and you don't find such a gem very often.I could praise you on and on but ill leave that for next that is whenever you update.I'm more than happy to tell you you've made me your fan,thanks for sharing:)
Maddam Redder chapter 7 . 9/13/2013
I am so utterly confused, but also very interested to see what's going on! I hope you continue soon! :)
Maddam Redder chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
Can't wait to see what's in that freezer! Yikes!
Maddam Redder chapter 5 . 8/7/2013
Interesting chapter. I'm curious about what will happen next :)
Calico Trayce chapter 4 . 12/6/2012
Beautiful! Magnificent! You made my day updating. I had to laugh out loud at Sig and his "pay for his stay" comment. Kinda got a bit sad for Milo this chapter, but only because the poor dear was in so much pain. Mercede is definitely pulling some strings I think... ah I love the whole mystery!

This new turn of events has me salivating for more! Sig and his friend... the week gone missing. I wonder what's going to happen!

I will continue to send people your way. My fans are your fans and I want as many people as possible to experience this rare gem. :)

Thank you for updating, and I look forward to more!

polar.amity chapter 3 . 12/3/2012
Calico Trayce is pimping out your story (you lucky dog, you) I can see why, it's very promising. I hope you get inspired to write a lot more and quick though, three chapters just arent going to cut it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
im waiting on power trip it got me hook
Calico Trayce chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Woohoo! You updated! This totally made my Saturdayyy. Hahaha, I was so excited I was reading most of it off my cell phone in bed. My boyfriend was like, "What are you doing?" _;;

But holy balls, Milo is crazaaaay. I love it! Seriously, the way you set up the scene with him touching and smelling Sig's floor - it was beautiful. Really just an awesome setup to get his character across. The whole time I was reading my jaw was open in wonder at the evil consuming him. Without a second thought he'd destroy someone so easily. Gaaah.

I really like Sig. He seems like a cool dude. Unlucky, but cool. I'm looking forward to knowing more about him, and if Milo really is going to destroy him. Ehehehe.

But it does seem likely that he won't lose sight of his goal, with how you describe Mercede's hold on him. I really loved this line: "Mercade's charming voice in his ear, taunting him, could convince him to set himself on fire." It really puts the emphasis on the control the monster has. :D

Altogether a GREAT chapter! Thank you so much for updating, and I look forward to more. C; Oh yes very much...

Love Calico
Calico Trayce chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
Eeee, I love this so much. Milo is seriously messed up and I'm fucking loving every piece of it. I really want to know what his plan will be "to get pain". Aaagh, I'm so curious. I want to know more. I want it darker!

Then when Milo is imagining Mercade with muscles and hot-bodyness, he's all like, "my mind is fascinating." FFFFFF- I almost died.

Agggh, and then the fantasy. D: /drools. Gagonhiscockbitch! LOL. You must excuse me, I just got done writing an oral rape scene not too long ago. I think I'm still in that non-con dark place I had to put myself. I'm scared of Milo, and I love how easily he just accepts this. Speaking about breaking someone down... hhhuuu. His psychologist was right. Super dangerous.

Dear god please write more. PLEASE PLEASE SHHHHHHIT.
I know a lot of this review is whining, but I am admittedly the worst reviewer in the world. All I can do is pathetically beg for more so that you will feel bad, give in and give me what I want. ;D

I'm hungry too guys!
Calico Trayce chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Wh-wha-b-b-but what is this awesomeness. Wow. What an intense first chapter. It hurts to admit this, but I usually never read other's stuff. Mostly because I get pissed and nothing interests me. Even the ones I get excited about I never read start to finish and would rather write my own boy's love.

Your story pulled me in like holy shit! Psychological issues! Wow, and a promise of non-con too. Sweet mother of Jesus, hold me back because I love that shiatsu.

I love Milo. Where did you dream up this heavenly character. Like, he is totally crazy! But he's right, what kind of life is it to lead when someone controls you? Being a fucking puppet sucks. I love his point of view. It really sucked me in.

Mercade - Does he smell of bubblegum? That'd be sweet. Totally twisted. I love him! Even though I truly think, yes, he's a fucking figment of Milo's imagination. Ffff-

I'm totally loving your story, and this is the first chapter. Meaning there's only one more chapter. Meaning I'll be sad.
Silk Angles chapter 2 . 5/27/2012

-wiggles eyebrows-

It's nice to read your work again-I like how this is starting out. I'll be reading.

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