Reviews for Lonely
T. F. Allen chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I knew this would be powerful right from the first line (that was a smack in the face that I did not expect in a poem). The rhymes are unexpected, but they work, and overall the poem conveys a thunderstorm of feelings all crashing around. Or a cross bows practice range.

I wonder, though, exactly what it all means. Lately, I've seen a lot that's really starting to confuse me - particularly involving you. I always feel like I'm the last to know: What's going on?