Reviews for Burned
Dinaharun chapter 1 . 1/10/2022
halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Dina, an editor for a fast growing platform, i would love to offer you something related to your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?
D00RFR4M3 chapter 27 . 9/19/2019
This was great, I really look forward to the rewrite.
yo chapter 27 . 9/11/2019
pretty cool, gotta admit the change in name will be helpful but for now the plot is rly sick! love it.
Person chapter 26 . 4/8/2015
I love this story! I just hinge read this over 3 days and I LOVED IT. I hope you consider continuing to write this story.
UltimateGamer101 chapter 26 . 7/31/2014
This story is great :D I started it yesterday and I just love how it's been coming along!
ReaderWriter2000 chapter 26 . 7/21/2014
So there is binge-watching...I think I just did some binge-reading. 26 of the longest, most detailed, and amazing chapters. I honestly kinda went into a fictionpress coma and huddled in a quiet room while I read.
Ahem...I freaking love this story and I'm so glad I caught it! MikkelxAndrea and MathiasxSavannah are soooo perfect. Perfect relationships all around! I'm also kind of a sucker for the damsel in distress stuff, so there's that too. I mean if I don't see what happens to Kit soon, and get another dose of a certain sexy dragon and kraken I might go cry in a corner. But, ya know, no rush or anything!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update and for going out of your way to provide us readers with such an exciting story!
Kiramekuchan chapter 25 . 8/26/2013
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* yet again you have me begging you for the next chapter. I love the relationships you create, how you draw the reader into the emotions of the characters. YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE. *fangirl flail*

3 your bestest squee buddy
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
Lol that story is from Hanatsukihime mang. At the beginning I already recognized it. Cool and sexy plotted btw. \\\\\\
Maximillium Devenier chapter 25 . 1/31/2013
It's a good story, but too many happy endings. If you really want to hook readers, do something drastic. Kill of a couple of characters, make one evil, etc. These are just sugestions.
- Max Dev
Valinta chapter 25 . 12/1/2012
AMG how did I not see this before adfdsfg can't wait until more manticore and when they 1D the shit out of everything if that happens
oh man I hope that happens

xD this is gorgeous and Aitalas is such a beautiful human being manticore being I guess but ahhhh this 3
just this is just 3333 god I love you and this story.
Guest chapter 25 . 11/27/2012
That was a cute chapter, a nice way to settle things down after the chaos of the past few chapters. As a reader, I can completely identify with the feeling of being able to rest easy after being emotionally and/or physically tense for hours. I almost breathed a sigh of relief along with the characters. I also liked the scene with the manticore. Their interactions were almost a source of comic relief to lighten the intensity of the events.

If I could give one tip, it would be to add lines dividing different scenes or shifts in perspective. Not so much in this chapter, but after the Author Note would've been good. What usually happens to me is I put stuff like that in the Word document but they disappear when I upload the document so I have to go back in and do it all over again. Anyway, that's just a little suggestion.

Shame about NaNo, but I hear ya. There's always next year, ne? Keep up the awesome writing!
deadkitty1 chapter 25 . 11/27/2012
Aw Cute! Yay! She's remembering!

Correct me if I'm wrong, but did you mean this as being the last chapter? Because I feel like there's unanswered questions on the bad guy's side. Bran never got what he wanted. The amulet and I doubt he'll stop just because part of his army got squashed. I also wanted some sort of closure for the rest of the characters: ie Regina & Andre and Mathais & Savannah. Maybe even Kit.

Am I selfish? haha It just doesn't feel like an ending to me so I'm sort of panicking that you stopped the story here. I'd understand it if there's some sort of sequel. That would make sense but then it should end on some juicy cliffhanger. So yeah. There's my spiel.

The last couple of chapters was some roller coaster. To be honest, I'm not a fan of bringing characters back to life but at the same time, I'm not going to complain much since it's Andrea who did just find the love of her life only to die the last second. I think the phoenix thing made me like it more too. Reading about new mythological creatures are cool.

You probably never planned for the story to go on as long as it did but I do hope you continue with it. I understand you're doing Nanowrimo so that might take up most of your time, in which I recommend putting this story on the side. We'll be here. I know I've waited on stories to finish that were in years time. It's kinda sad... Also good luck with Nanowrimo. It takes some dedication to write that much every day. :)
Guest chapter 24 . 11/19/2012
Aww, that was a heartfelt, bittersweet chapter. I so love this story though, the writing and everything. (Not sure if I said that already). I have a feeling Andrea's memories will slowly come back to her. Guess that remains to be seen!

I'm just too lazy to log in, sorry. :P How's NaNo coming along? I totally understand writer's block, lol. Happens to me aaall the time. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next!
Kat7CA chapter 24 . 11/19/2012
I love this story and I will never stop saying it! :)
Valinta chapter 24 . 11/19/2012
Can't wait till the next chapter! :DD MANTICORES UNITE!
Like seriously I cannot wait to meet the gay manticore Aitalas! I might do a fullbody picture of him because, um, like, lion and whatever. So sweet. Unbelievably sweet.

This chapter honest to God made me tear up. Andrea can't remember and amg D: So much sad everywhere. This is depressing.

Also, the boyband name should be something so ridiculously obvious that it's not obvios. Like the Monty Core. That'd be awesome.
I think so at least.
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