|Reviews for Nightingale|
| Kamibi chapter 2 . 9/21/2012
I don't understand . . . Why doesn't this have more reviews? Your writing style is a perfect balance of objective and subjective (I think that's the word I'm looking for), and the story is completely unpredictable. The background information is delivered splendidly, without you actually stating it bluntly. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but I understand if you've hit a mental block. Please continue with this!
| Kamibi chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I'm looking forward to seeing this story develop. I think I scent an intricate and in-depth plot beginning . . . ? Have you ever read the Dresden Files? You should; I think this story could be very similar, but also delightfully different. Perhaps the ratio of dialogue : non-dialogue is a little skewed, and the one-sentence paragraphs that come as a result of that make the chapter look a little thin, but all in all, this is a good first impression. Please do not give up on this, and please, PLEASE make this as good as I think you can make it, my judgments purely based upon the content and style of this chapter. Congratulations; I'm fairly hooked.