|Reviews for Just a Dare|
| beverlyamethyst16 chapter 25 . 6/28/2013
Oh no... :O That cliffy was SO not cool. Loved that chapter though ahahaha. And I can't believe that he's so adamant that he doesn't love her... especially after EVERYTHING that's happened!
Amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next :)
| blakbird0019 chapter 25 . 6/21/2013
Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed before. I like to wait a while before reviewing so I have constructive things to say haha. Right now, I'm not really going to review your story. I'm going to make a quick comment on this chapter. I don't have much time so that's why I'm going to seem like a jerk :/ I'll come back later to review your story.
The issue I had with this chapter was that you didn't really... transition-I guess?-back into the present. You had the label for the section that was in the past, but then you just came back into the present somewhere along the way, expecting everyone to know when that happened. When did this happen? I'm not sure. Was it the auto shop scene? I actually thought that was in the past still since you didn't specify otherwise. I was kinda thrown off when we were visiting Trey's house with Melody. I thought, when that scene first started, we were still in the past. Yeah, I quickly found out otherwise from making assumptions but the reader shouldn't have to do that. My point: tell us when we are back in the present to prevent confusion and useless rants such as mine :P
I'm sorry if I seemed like a jerk. I'm only trying to help. I saw that no one else commented on that so I may be the only one who feels this way. I figured I'd point this out to help make this chapter a little better. Other than that, it was fine. I think also the majority of the confusion, on my part, came from not reading this story in a while. I kinda lost the feel of it so this just threw me off. Sorry again :P
| mylittleprincess chapter 25 . 6/20/2013
omg! calm down Trey,update fast.
| CaityLightning chapter 25 . 6/20/2013
WHY DID MELODY GO IN HIS DAD'S OLD ROOM?! She knows how that makes him feel.. damn, this girl is asking for trouble.. lool, update soon!
| beverlyamethyst16 chapter 24 . 5/27/2013
Aww that was so cute :) I loved it! I can't wait to see what happens with everything :D I'm JUST SO EXCITED. And I hope him asking her is as romantic as she wants ;)
| JJsMommy29 chapter 24 . 5/25/2013
can't wait to see what his plan is to ask her to prom
| Amanda 3 chapter 24 . 5/24/2013
Yay! Finally! D: geezus girl, I had to skim over ch. 23 to remember all that happened...but this was so worth the wait! When Trey went into the closet and the suspense was rising up till the moment when he was to grab melody, I really was picturing this charming scene where he would passionately sweep her into the closet and gaze intently into her pouty eyes... XD I think he was imagining it going that smoothly too but Nope! Lol, all for the best though. Because of the clumsy scene it backed up what she said about him not being romantic enough and personally I don't know why she feels like she should have this O so special moment of him asking her to prom, like an engagement or something but it does let you know she likes romance and more of a fairy tale like relationship :3 so cute. And it gives Trey a challenge that will show his more considerate and tender side :3 Can't wait to see what he's gonna do and how this dinner will go over, will it be cute? dull? hilariously awkward? polite? :D Hurry and whip up a master piece already! 3 3 3
| CaityLightning chapter 24 . 5/24/2013
Awesome chapter : ) this story is honeslty amazing and I adore it greatly. The sentece structure is nice, the grammar is amazing and the character development for Trey and Mel is exquisite. Amazing job and can't wait till next chapter XD
| PsychoticParadigm chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Oooohhh I am enjoying it so far. ;))
| xXMissMcKaylaXx chapter 24 . 5/24/2013
I just read all these chapters in one sitting- I couldn't put my phone down until I was done! Let me just say... AH! I am in love with this story! Trey is such a loveable bad boy, and I love how Melody is not your typical "most sought after girl in high school" character! Both are dealing with pain from their past, and I love how Mel is slowly showing Trey that he still has some sunshine left in his soul! You are incredibly talented, and I love the fact that you wrote the story from Trey's point of view! It's nice to be able to get in a guy's head sometimes- even if he's just fictional :D there's just a... Realistic flare to the whole thing, it's not some fluffy, everything is rainbows and fowers type of story, although I personally think Trey and Melody are ADORABLE together! I'm dreading when she actually finds out about the bet :/ but I'm hoping this story will have a very happy ending! Now that I have basically written YOU a book, let me sum everything up in a simple manner of speaking- I cannot wait to read more, so please keep up the AMAZING work! 3
| icywhisperingkiss chapter 24 . 5/23/2013
So here's the deal. You know I love you. But I've got to lay down all the cards here.
I THOUGHT YOU DIED.
I literally had convinced myself I would never have Melotrey again because you were a victim of a murder, or gas leak, or something! I'M NOT KIDDING!
PM me next time you have horrible writers block! I have SO many ideas jumbled in my brain and if I could leave an itty bitty finger print on this story, I would be so beyond happy.
So PLEASE. Don't make me think you died again. I beg of you.
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/20/2013
:'( u said-u-u said t-that y-y-o-u would up-p-date
And- and you n-n-neverrrrrrr! :( waaaah if I wanted it to skip I would put it to when melody finds out about the bet n they brake up and then make up :) looool I'd like that x please update tomorrow
| beverlyamethyst16 chapter 23 . 4/10/2013
Amazing chapter! I loved reading about their pasts :) and that funny chocolate moment hahaha. Loved it... I can hardly wait for the next one !
| RainbowCloudArt chapter 23 . 4/9/2013
I was crying whiles reading this story, something of a major feat for one to accomplish. I just love this story so much! It's beautifully written and made me cry (something I hardly do when reading) and I just love the story in general just so much! Please update soon because I need to know what happens next!
| CaityLightning chapter 23 . 4/8/2013
Is it legal to be such a good writer?! Cuz hollllaaayyyy you are amazing! Can't wait till next week! I'm dying from anticipation! Update soon!