Reviews for Just a Dare
Guest chapter 22 . 7/31/2013
update soon please... obviously this story is special to me cos this is the first time ive ever reviewed for a story plz update soon xxx
Guest chapter 26 . 7/21/2013
haha youve already got 200 now :) i might be 201 yayyy
Cheechee chapter 26 . 7/16/2013
AMAZING.

100!
Guest chapter 26 . 7/15/2013
You Are Amazing
mgmtlover18 chapter 26 . 7/14/2013
I don't like melody...
Guest chapter 26 . 7/14/2013
It IS true that a lot of people try not to care so much coz they would end up getting hurt..but that seems to be a coward's way out huh?..Ultimately, when you end up losing that person you're trying so hard to hate, you end up hurting anyhow with the added regret that you did not make every second count with the time you had left with said person...
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 26 . 7/14/2013
Well now you're only FOUR reviews away from 200 :) And you definitely deserve it! Amazing chapter. I loved every second. I know that all the pushing each other away stuff is probably not over but we're getting somewhere, right? :)
Update soon! You know what cliffhangers do to me Haha...
tonightsphantasm chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I love your writing style so much and I adore your story plot! I genuinely do. Do you mind checking out my fic and tell me your opinions about it? I'm still a new writer and I kinda need adequate-professional feedbacks to improve. :)
mylittleprincess chapter 26 . 7/14/2013
OMG! update soon:)
CaityLightning chapter 26 . 7/14/2013
Amazing chapter as always! Intense, action packed, and suspenseful. Melody is so bold, and I'm glad that Trey is finally opening up to her. Update soon!
myonyxnight chapter 25 . 7/11/2013
I really love this story. I don't care if it takes you a few months to upload a new chapter. It is a great idea. Keep rocking it
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 25 . 6/28/2013
Oh no... :O That cliffy was SO not cool. Loved that chapter though ahahaha. And I can't believe that he's so adamant that he doesn't love her... especially after EVERYTHING that's happened!
Amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next :)
blakbird0019 chapter 25 . 6/21/2013
Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed before. I like to wait a while before reviewing so I have constructive things to say haha. Right now, I'm not really going to review your story. I'm going to make a quick comment on this chapter. I don't have much time so that's why I'm going to seem like a jerk :/ I'll come back later to review your story.

The issue I had with this chapter was that you didn't really... transition-I guess?-back into the present. You had the label for the section that was in the past, but then you just came back into the present somewhere along the way, expecting everyone to know when that happened. When did this happen? I'm not sure. Was it the auto shop scene? I actually thought that was in the past still since you didn't specify otherwise. I was kinda thrown off when we were visiting Trey's house with Melody. I thought, when that scene first started, we were still in the past. Yeah, I quickly found out otherwise from making assumptions but the reader shouldn't have to do that. My point: tell us when we are back in the present to prevent confusion and useless rants such as mine :P

I'm sorry if I seemed like a jerk. I'm only trying to help. I saw that no one else commented on that so I may be the only one who feels this way. I figured I'd point this out to help make this chapter a little better. Other than that, it was fine. I think also the majority of the confusion, on my part, came from not reading this story in a while. I kinda lost the feel of it so this just threw me off. Sorry again :P
mylittleprincess chapter 25 . 6/20/2013
omg! calm down Trey,update fast.
CaityLightning chapter 25 . 6/20/2013
WHY DID MELODY GO IN HIS DAD'S OLD ROOM?! She knows how that makes him feel.. damn, this girl is asking for trouble.. lool, update soon!
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