Reviews for If I Had A Time Machine
True Talker chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Parts of it were really very sweet.
Archia chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Oh how sad, so sad. I feel so sorry for this girl, you did great work with the emotions. I liked how the time machine part at the beginning set the tone kind of for the rest, and then it ended like that. Oh I also really liked that part that was repeated a few times, that was so sweet. But then at the end, so sad. Really nice job with this poem and its whole idea.