Reviews for Blink, Blink at Me, Damsel
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Beautiful piece created with detailed metaphors and a structure that carries the reader through the poem. Nice job. Keep Writing!
Self-DissectedPsyche chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I see lot of common romantic metaphors which have had new life breathed into them by your wording. You mentioned that English is not your first language, but you've managed a brilliant command of its mechanics. This poem in particular is Shakespearean to me, and holds the same mature, thought out romanticism. While the whole poem speaks of an all encompassing love, the final stanza brings it all back down to earth, back to her, and brilliantly accents the damsel with worship and loyalty. Lovely.
Jenny Sue chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Really lovely poem. For some reason I really loved the line 'How tall is that ladder that leads to your dreams'.
True Talker chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Wow, that is amazing and I am blown away. Thank you so very truly much for sharing this.