Reviews for Untitled 1
imyandere can't log in chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Really good! I felt like I was inside the character's mind! :)
DovesAnthamRains chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Quite fabulous, I must say. Though the stream-of-thought style is a little hard to follow, The confusion and pain within an insane person's mind is very well crafted. If this is a product of boredom, then I think we could all use a little more boredom in our lives.

JaredDean chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I felt like I was reading the inner thoughts of a psychopath. Great job.
She'sALady-SoTreatHerLikeOne chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Really good stuff man. eerie and dark, but so full of emotion. Personally I think this is a amazing and I hope to read more. Great job.