Reviews for Rape
Thomicas chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Oh my goodness! This is some seriously dark stuff, but you execute it well, sustaining the suspense throughout and really nail that feeling of being so utterly forsaken.

You start out with addressing the 'boyfriend' as 'you' in the beginning, but as soon as 'the friend' turns around it's 'them' and 'they' for a little while. I really liked that and I think it really underlined the estrangement of the narrator (don't know if this was a conscious decision, or if it just happened in the heat of the moment? Either way it creates a strong effect).

It's a very sad, and also very well written and great poem.