Reviews for Tom & Becky
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 9 . 1/11/2013
Your an amazing writer :) And this story is really interesting!
Searchingformyheart chapter 6 . 1/5/2013
I'm not even kidding. This is really good! And you should definitely continue it. I love the atmosphere and your writing style, not to mention the fact that you actually have grammar. Keep writing!
deepsealife chapter 6 . 10/11/2012
this is amazing! plz update and soon!
TOMEFROMYOU chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
vulgar? No but if anything if you wanted it could be more... thats not something to worry bout... im not saying full on sex or anyhting but kissing flirting drinking thats not that bad. Ive read worse... and also maybe shorter chapters but i really liked it! :)
chewychester chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Nothing really to critisize. I like it. If there is one thing I would like more of, it is the thoughts inside their heads when all this friction is heating up between them. ;P