Reviews for Sir Time
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
It resembles Alice In wonderland
Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Wow this was very enjoyable.

Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
wow. You continue to amaze me! The way you choose your words and present them in your style perplexes me. Very well done! I loved it! Hope to read more from you soon! Keep it up! :)

As always, keep writing!

DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
A very original idea I like how you altered the rhyme scheme it gave the piece depth, but I love the second stanza such brilliant metaphor and imagery. I like how you started the last stanza but for me it lost a lot of power on the last line. A good write :)