Reviews for Horizon Lines
a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
i loved the description in this and the rambling, how you tied everything together. very pretty to read. :)
B.A. Howard chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Very nice, reminds me of Virginia Woolf. Good job
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Very interesting and I particularly liked the last lines of this piece. The whole poem is littered with great word choices, but the last lines:

i have no

telescope. only eyelashes netting the milky way.

My only suggestion here if any is to start each line with a capital letter to define it. Nothing more to be said and then that is optional.

Wonderful Imagery throughout,

Well Done,

Keep Writing

Fabian Cortez