Reviews for The Surprise
Devoted Fan chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I BLOODY LOVED POLITICAL ENGAGEMENT AND EVERYTHING!
I CAN NOT PUT MY LOVE INTO ENOUGH WORDS, PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL, EVEN IF IT IS EVERYDAY LIFE.
I am quite sad that it's not a son because then there is more of a further development like his childhood. If it is a girl, in my opinion, it is harder to progress a new story. To be honest, a good new development would be that someone would be interested in Rysem and Orlength could see that person liking him and is totally jealous. Whilst Rysdem is completely unaware of it because he is ONLY thinking about Orlenth.
PLEASE PLEASE LET THERE BE A SEQUEL! ...no pressure.
ryujikarin chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
hahaha they're so sweeeet..
Lucy Belle chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I'm thinking that no further sequel is required. I really liked both this and the core story. The girl seems so cute! Makes me want one.
fuzzipueo chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Ah, how sweet! I like very much.
CalliScribbles chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Rysem, it is a child, not a puppy! You're not supposed to bring one home as a surprise...

On the other hand, Squee!
Sinar chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
That was very sweet.