Reviews for No Vacancies
collypollyy chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I LOVE THE WAY THIS FLOWED SO MUCH. It just was so easy and it flowed right into the next line with such EASE. It was like a light fluffy poem because it was so nice to read and it was fun.

Okay, sorry I'm really tired but I know I needed to review this before I kept forgetting. Anyway, I liked how you wrote about this with an event in your life present. It's very obvious. When you write the words, it's like you are creating the whole scene for the readers in a more creative viewpoint and emotions. My favorite lines are

"Eyes are not magic

They deflate you so casually"

Simple and to the point with where you are trying to go in this piece. THIS WAS so good. :)