Reviews for Zipped
collycoco chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Y U SO AMAZING? Okay so, I like amazing this is written. The imagery in this is really interesting and the way it's written is so cool. (I couldn't think of a good word.) Anyway, I started to get a little tear eyed at the stanza

"while men

who spoke at their mothers

decided tonight

was the time for walls to crumble."

You probably know why, haha but it got me all tear eyed, so good job! Your writing is very relatable and it can effect the reader in many ways, thanks.. Haha just kidding you know I love you! ;D That's why it's amazinnnnnng writing!

I like you described the children in this because they are so young and really don't understand. They usually are watchers and they have no real emotions towards something like this happening. But you worded in a way that is so interesting, like something I haven't seen before.

MEH STOP MAKING ME SO PROUD OF YOUUUUU! YOU'RE LIKE GROWING UP. STOP. JUST STOP.
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
This is my first time reading the poem you say you've written like 50 times and I must say it's brilliant. I love how abstract yet concrete it is. Very interesting.