|Reviews for The Ragnarok Part 1: The Child of the Moon|
| TruffleHead chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Oh my cranberries you need to continue this. :) I was laughing my /brains/ out the whole way through this. With your writing style, you have a way of just nonchalantly slipping the humor in a sentence and catching us off guard. XD For example, this sentence really helped the fic start off well:
"I flopped out of bed in a daze, threw my pillow at my little brother Henry who ran out of the room cackling like a maniac, and started to get dressed." XD *uncontrollable giggling commences*
So, a reincarnation of Thor, then? That's a brilliant idea! I also like the fact that he was an atheist all of his life. Would have made it a little awkward if he arrived in Asguard believing in a different set of gods. :) Anyways, this was brilliant and I'm eagerly awaiting more! :) Please?
| AriaRose7 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
This story seems really interesting so far. You developed Thomas's character well. I like how he starts off as the middle child before discovering he is a god. I am looking forward to see how this story unravels.