|Reviews for Choices|
| CrackinAndProudOfIt chapter 3 . 7/19/2013
Ooh, this is fascinating! I like your use of second-person here, though at times it makes it a little hard to "get to know" the protagonist. But there's plenty to characterize her, too, like the reference to her homesickness in this last chapter.
Your language and descriptions are very good, and the world "I've" found myself in seems very complex. Things do seem to be kept a little vague up to that point, but that just adds a fittingly surreal effect to the story. :) I'm sure there'll be more explanation when you next update. (I hope you do! :)
| thegirlwhoknew chapter 3 . 9/21/2012
Really well written. It was scary, and everything it should be. Good job.
| Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
It's really good. You made it sound so scary, especially the last line.
| Zulu chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I have this fear also. How can we take it away and live joyously?
| CTO chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
There's an amusing sense of satire in it. Love it!
| In Case You Haven't Noticed chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This story made a really good point, and I was confused at first with the knife bit, but it later all made perfect sense. I'm not surprised that your teacher liked this story, and it should honestly get way more reviews!
| Not My Fault Im Gay chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Awesome, but cut it with the knife references.
| HilaryDroxursox chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
That was great!