Reviews for To See the World in Watercolour
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
This is really interesting. The ending was different than what I had expected. It makes the reader stop and think.

Some periods would help to read the separate sentences. Also, you said "back round" instead of "background."

Good job on this. Keep writing!
SelfTitledLife chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Amazing poem.
Sami Dial chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
you are amazing! i love this its so true and so wrong of the world in general. work on the spelling of COLOR, but thats ok, i'm a bad speller aswell. keep it up tho. i'll be looking for more form you :)