|Reviews for i remember|
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
| a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
"i remember all the times you swore you were i couldn't find you in the dark"
i love the nostalgia in this, especially the last stanza, it just really ties the whole thing together with the whole "i remember and you forget". it's painful to read, almost, in a way. great job dollface, keep it up. :)
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Very nice poem! Strong and powerful. Also very moving. Keep it up .