Reviews for Jealousy Best Served Devious
Rayney chapter 17 . 4/24
yay!another update,ohmigod*tears of joy*thank you so much.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/22
I'm sorry to hear about the people you lost, I hope life only gets better for you

*transferring happy feelings through the internet.. Zzz*
Guest chapter 17 . 4/22
Must be frustrating for Shelly.. Honestly a friend like Kaylee can make you feel like you're about to go insaaaane. Requires tons of patience and self control. Although she went too far, I think Shelly was right with what she initially said (so minus the who would Brandon and janessa pick and you would be friendless part).. I also dont think she should have cut ties with Kaylee but I dont blame her for reaching a breaking point. Kaylee's plan is plain bonkers and she's doing it for what? To win trash? She doesnt listen to the advice and opinion of people who care about her.. What she sees in Ryder only God knows! (not sure why I'm speaking about her as if she's real lol). Why is she so unhealthily obsessed with him, If everyone in your life tells you someone isn't good for you then generally they have a good reason and see something you've missed
Fantasque chapter 17 . 4/21
Thanks for the update!

Kaylee missing the forest for the trees is funny and frustrating but Shelley needs to have a stadium full of seats. If my best friend spoke to me that way (and had the nerve to say I was dumb for not doing what she wanted) I would have been torn between never talking to her again and beating her like I was Mike Tyson in his prime, lol.
Kristy Collins chapter 17 . 4/21
Firstly, I'm glad writing is helping you cope with your losses and I genuinely hope as time goes on you find more comfort in memories of those gone on than you find pain or sadness.
Secondly, I forgive you for the late update - mostly because it's awesome and there's so much delicious drama. I hope Shelley and Kaylee make up soon (and that Kaylee realises her and Tyler are meant to be),
And thirdly, good luck with finals! Already looking forward to the next update!
Melly chapter 15 . 4/21
Shelley is seriously pissing me off and stop calling your bestfriend stupid like wtf. Hopefully next chapter we will have more KAYLER action
Melly chapter 17 . 4/21
Yes another update, thanks ma
AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick chapter 16 . 4/6
Really glad you're back writing again. Had to re-read the story again and have enjoyed it so much. Can't wait for your next update!
Melly chapter 16 . 4/5
Yep I came back and read all the new chapters and Ijsut love this story. Tyler and Kaylee are adorable and as for Tyler he has been in love with Kaylee since they were babies. He knows her so well and is always so protective of her in his own way. He is starting to relize his feelings for her but Kaylee might take a bit longer. I love my KAYLER or TYLEE
sunshinernnr chapter 16 . 4/5
i enjoyed this chapter! Kinda like a hot cocoa chapter.. where everything goes smoothly while still being exciting. I loved the "What?" "What-what?" interchange between the two. :) And I love Kaylee's interactions with her family. They have a lot of personality instead of just being placeholder characters. Looking forward to more of this sweet story.
MaztheSpaz chapter 16 . 4/5
"It tastes like concentrated evil." Omg for some reason I laughed so hard at this. I may use this one next time I have the misfortune of eating something nasty.
Throughout reading this chapter I was cheesing so hard and I laughed aloud at Tyler rocking up in that t-shirt. Like, who even does that? LOL Kaylee is still clueless as ever. No one goes to that extent to impress someone they don't have feelings for. And with all the nerves and worry about Tyler meeting her family she did not think or mention Ryder once. Girl, you are halfway in love with Tyler already. And it's obvious (to me at least) that Tyler is in love with Kaylee and probably has been for as long as she's been obsessed with Ryder. Not once through all this fake dating has he even made any indication that he's trying to get Celeste back lol I love their banter and how Kaylee is always 100% herself when she is with Tyler. Ugh can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for the update x
Melly chapter 16 . 4/5
This chapter had me laughing so hard. You are such a great writer. Kaylee and Tyler for the win
Melly chapter 14 . 4/4
First and foremost condolences. Just know you will be ok and I will keep you and your family in my prayers. Secondly I have been checking for updates on a regular basis praying to see a new chapter and tonight there were two. Thank you so much and you didnt disappoint
Guest chapter 5 . 4/4
I couldn't pass this chapter without saying something. I love Kaylee and Tyler's fights. They are hilarious and so comfortable together. I hope they still argue and curse each other out when they eventually get together. It's just too funny. And Tyler's a boss, man. Kaylee always talks about how fly he looks and the brother jumped FULLY clothed to save her. He was like fresh kicks be damned.
Fantasque chapter 16 . 4/4
I feel like Tyler is leading Kaylee down the garden path with this fake dating that isn't really fake debacle, are acting like a couple when no one is around and she seems to think it is so they can get comfortable but he seems to know exactly what he is about.
I reread the entire story when you posted your first update of 2016 and Tyler has been paying lip service to getting his ex back yet his actions seem like he is over her. And Kaylee is so blind that I think he could talk her into anything if he made it about Ryder. Too funny.

Thanks for the update!
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