Reviews for The Joining
Elizabeth Drake chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
Kissing is the currency? Lol! So if you wanted a house you'd have to give out hundreds of thousands of kisses? I'm surprised the economy hasn't collapsed... And pocket money isnt much good. Also this is well written and I found it really funny.
Loren chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I understand this is just the first chapter, so you're probably aware of this, but why is Martin so disillusioned with the society he lives in? If his friends, family and everyone else he interacts with are on board, it would have to be something pretty significant for him to take little to no interest at all in his own coming-of-age ceremony.
Soloe chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Your first chapter did a very good job of introducing the characters as well as the plot. Martin is a very likeable character. All your characters seemed so natural/believable in the ways they interacted. I find the plot very appealing and I eagerly look forward to updates.
Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
This was good.