Reviews for Dream State
thetabbykitteh chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Wow this poem speaks to me so much it isn't even funny especially the line with the hazel-green eyes and the whole dream state thing.
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
wow. This is really good! I love the descriptions, choice of words, and I think I perceived personification in this piece, idk maybe its just me. Anyways. I loved the way you describe this past relationship and how it still haunts you even in dreams. Very clever and well done and written. Brilliant, keep it up! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni